What do you think of collecting all of Sam's comments on our journal writing?
I think we could learn some new words and expressions in his corrections and comments in red.
It could be used for our students in writing class.
What do you think?
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His comments on my journal writing is so complex and he used difficult vocabulary that I looked up the dictionary five times.
If yyou want, where do you want to load it?
It sounds a good idea. I'll make a our online cafe for our class on the web. Let's upload Sam's comment into the bulletin board of the cafe.
I think we'd better just share the new expressions or phrases, not the whole comments cause it may be the personal things to keep to themselves.
Hi, Sunny.
That's a good idea. We can use Sam's comments to comment our students'writing. The first comment on my first writing is,"Keep up the excellent writing! Your writing has a nice flow and variety of sentence structures. I think I'm going to enjoy reading your journal this sessions!" Heee..too good comment? The second one is, " I see you're applying what you've learned in Nicole's class to your journal writing, and I applaud your conscientiousness."
Is it OK, Sunny?
Why don't you write another question for the next week?
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